My tears are like the quiet drift of petals from some magic rose and all my grief flows from the rift of unremembered skies and snows. I think that if I touched the earth, it would crumble; It is so sad and beautiful, so tremulously like a dream ....(Dylan Thomas)

Tuesday, March 06, 2007

EJERCICIO

Escriba un poema en no más de veinte versos
que hable sobre la inmortalidad del cangrejo
o sobre las fiestas típicas de la zona fronteriza de Sri Lanka
que para el caso es lo mismo –o casi
que sus silencios sean elocuentes
que comience con un endecasílabo sáfico
que use sinestesia hipérbole anáfora
sinalefa tarántula hidrólisis
que sea sencillo directo
complejo meditabundo jurásico
sin lugares comunes
sin metáforas rebuscadas
sin parafrasear a los mismos de siempre
sin demasiado adjetivo, carajo!!
no describa no rime no explique no piense no
repita no llore no fume no escupa
no eructe no no mejor no diga nada enróllelo y métaselo en el culo.

26 Comments:

At 7:55 AM, Blogger Pablo Hernández M. said...

no te leía hace mucho... que bueno saber que todavían andás por alli amigo

 
At 6:00 PM, Blogger alejandrapiam said...

traté, pero no pude!

 
At 6:00 PM, Blogger alejandrapiam said...

traté, pero no pude!

 
At 6:00 PM, Blogger alejandrapiam said...

traté, pero no pude!

 
At 6:01 PM, Blogger alejandrapiam said...

bueno traté sólo una vez, tu blog es el que triplica los esfuerzos...

 
At 3:57 PM, Blogger Beto said...

Jajajaja, sólo Ud puede escribir uno de esos poemas che. Los demás estamos boqueando a orillas del mar

 
At 4:03 PM, Blogger cala labbé said...

a veces, es lo mejor que podría hacerse, jejeje...
no digo que yo lo haría, por si...jaja
abrazos y besos!, pa ti y pa la novia!

 
At 7:53 PM, Blogger xwoman said...

"que sea sencillo directo
complejo meditabundo jurásico" GENIAL!


jjajjajaj
Me gusta eso de metérselo en el culo!

Cada vez escribes mejor payasito, cada vez te admiro más!
;)

 
At 8:02 PM, Blogger xwoman said...

y se puede un pedo?
jej;p

 
At 3:29 PM, Blogger Pablo Hernández M. said...

hola... perdona que lo haga por aquí pero no se por donde más hacerlo... te invito a que veas este link de mi BLOG... es la información sobre un recital de poesía y trova...

http://allaenlonublado.blogspot.com/2007/06/trova-y-poesa-en-cobn.html ...

saludos

 
At 6:51 AM, Blogger Carmen Posada said...

Creo que lo he leído unas 7 veces pero no me atrevo a decir mayor cosa y las cosas que he dicho ya suenan repetitivas... en fin! Ejercitate!!!

 
At 4:08 PM, Blogger Luna said...

Muy gueno!

 
At 9:43 AM, Blogger m.d.i. said...

Pues lo escribo, le doy métrica, hago que los versos dejen en humillación a los trapesistas, que las palabras sean universos condensados... todo en tinta y papel, y ya está terminado, sólo que ahora te lo meto a vos por el culo.

 
At 11:26 AM, Anonymous ángel said...

Ejercicio literario que pocos llevan, qué lástima, hasta las últimas consecuencias de tu poema.



Saludos...

 
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